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I think Koreans want to have a girl. Because girls are friendly. People around me want a daughter, too
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Good morning, Emily! I think you are right! Mostly, daughters take care of their parents when they are old.-Faith-
I think Koreans want to have a girl. Because girls are friendly.
>> I think Koreans want to have a girl because girls are friendly.
People around me want a daughter, too
>> People around me want a daughter, too.
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