homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
Do you sometimes decide for other people? Answer in a few sentences.
Yes, I do that often. I think it is important to be considerate to others. For example, I know that my boyfriend is thoughtful for me.
So I would let my boyfriend eat he wants because my boyfriend can\'t eat a lot of food.
Thank you always. Have a joyful weekend, Donna!
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] Ju! Good evening!
Sometimes, we have to decide for others because they trust us to do it for them. Moreover, in our society where there is a leader and followers, most often than not, the leader makes a decision for the good of the majority such as the job of the president. Therefore, in our lives, we will be deciding for others for little or big matters and we need to be very wise.
Thank you very much for doing this homework. Generally, a great portion of your sentences are correct. So go over the suggestions I made below and study them well.
Have a peaceful and relaxing weekend!
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
Thank you always. Have a joyful weekend, Donna!
I think it is important to be considerate to others.
>> Correct!
For example, I know that my boyfriend is thoughtful for me.
>> For example, I know that my boyfriend is thoughtful to me.
So I would let my boyfriend eat he wants because my boyfriend can\'t eat a lot of food.
>> So I would let my boyfriend eat what he wants because he can\'t eat a lot of food.
Thank you always. Have a joyful weekend, Donna!
>> Correct!
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