homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi. It's little cold.
Always, Thank you for your kindly teaching.
I did homework for the first time in this class.^^
1. The shiny spaceship landed in my yard.
The adjective shiny describes spaceship.
2. An alien with big eyes walked out of the ship.
The adjective big describes eyes.
3. It waved its tiny hand in the air.
The adjective tiny describes hand.
4. The alien said, 'Earth is such a beautiful planet.'
The adjective beautiful describes planet.
5. A brown rabbit hopped into the yard and scared the alien.
The adjective brown describes rabbit.
Have a good day. see you later.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. You almost did it correctly however you forgot
to put the article \" THE\" and it is very important.Have a nice day.
Hi. It\'s little cold.
>>Hi! Its a bit cold here.Always, Thank you for your kindly teaching.>>Thank you for your kindness in teaching me.I did homework for the first time in this class.^^>>For the first time I did my homework in our class.1. The shiny spaceship landed in my yard.The adjective shiny describes spaceship.
>>The adjective shiny describes the spaceship. ( Don\'t forget the article The)2. An alien with big eyes walked out of the ship.The adjective big describes eyes.
>>The adjective big describes the alien\'s eyes.3. It waved its tiny hand in the air.The adjective tiny describes hand.
>>The adjective tiny describes the hand.4. The alien said, \'Earth is such a beautiful planet.\'The adjective beautiful describes planet.
>>The adjective beautiful describes the planet (also accept Earth).5. A brown rabbit hopped into the yard and scared the alien.The adjective brown describes rabbit.
>>The adjective brown describes the rabbit.Have a good day. see you later.
>>Have a good day! See you later.
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