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How do you manage your finances wisely?
Frankly speaking, I don\'t managing my money.
When I receive salary, I save money and pay off the principal of a loan. Because 2 years ago, I bought my apartment.
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It\'s really good that you already own a house, Emily. I heard that these days home prices are really high in Korea. See you tomorrow!-Faith-
How do you manage your finances wisely?>> CORRECT
Frankly speaking, I don\'t managing my money.
Frankly speaking, I don\'t managing my money.
>> Frankly speaking, I don\'t manage my money.
When I receive salary, I save money and pay off the principal of a loan.
>> When I receive my salary, I save money to pay off the principal of my housing loan two years ago.
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