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I think I go mountains once 3 months. I don’t like mountain but I don’t hate mountain. So, I think I go to mountain not often. I like the top of mountain. Because, I can feel result of climbing. Also I can breathe fresh air. Therefore I go mountain sometime despite I don’t like hiking. At the top, I always take a picture with stone that mountain’s name is writing. Because, after hiking I can memorize that mountain again.
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Hi Bella!
You never fail to amaze me.
There are patterns here that I never thought you could use.
This impresses me a lot.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think I go mountains once 3 months.
>> I think I go to the mountains once every three months.
I don’t like mountain but I don’t hate mountain.
>> I don’t like mountains but I don’t hate them either.
So, I think I go to mountain not often.
>> So I think I don\'t go to the mountains that often.
I like the top of mountain.
>> I like the top of the mountain.
Because, I can feel result of climbing.
>> I can feel the fruits of my efforts in climbing.
Also I can breathe fresh air.
>> I can also breathe in the fresh air.
Therefore I go mountain sometime despite I don’t like hiking.
>> Therefore, I sometimes go to the mountains even though I don’t like hiking.
At the top, I always take a picture with stone that mountain’s name is writing.
>> At the top, I always take a picture with a stone with the mountain’s name written on it.
Because, after hiking I can memorize that mountain again.
>> It\'s because after hiking, I can experience going to that mountain again.
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