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2012-03-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hello, Ms. [Name]! It's not bright weather until this week! Anyway It's so many difficult today's homework! I don't know anything, but anyway I can. 1. Here is not (the) university. 2. I have ever been to (the) Lotteworld. 3. I can't (come) with you. I have another promise. 4. I broke () my girlfriend. 5. I (came) home late. 6. I'll date her (outdoor) this Saturday. 7. I (am going to) go to a trip. 8. I have to (take) my weight. 9. When I was high school (student). 10. I (rode) rollerskating last weekend. Thank you so much!

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Sir Steve! Thank you so much for your composition today. I appreciate your effort in doing your best to answer this homework. I know that this homework is quite difficult, but I admire you for trying to answer it. Keep up the positive attitude! Take care and I\'ll talk with you later. T. JanE ^^   Hello, Ms. [Name]!>> Correct.It\'s not bright weather until this week!>> It won\'t be sunny until the end of this week.Anyway It\'s so many difficult today\'s homework!>> Anyway, the homework for today is so difficult.I don\'t know anything, but anyway I can.>> I don\'t know anything about it, but I\'ll do my best.1. Here is not (the) university.>> This is not a university.2. I have ever been to (the) Lotteworld.>> I have been to Lotteworld (\'ever\' is only used for questions in \'Have you ever?\')3. I can\'t (come) with you. I have another promise.>> I can\'t go with you. I have another appointment/ I\'ve promised to meet someone else (\'a promise\' is the act of promising someone something or the general word for promising something, and isn\'t used as a general expression for having an arrangement).4. I broke () my girlfriend.>> I broke up with my girlfriend.5. I (came) home late.>> I went home late.6. I\'ll date her (outdoor) this Saturday.>> I\'ll take her out (on a date) this Saturday.7. I (am going to) go to a trip.>> I will go on a trip.8. I have to (take) my weight.>> I have to lose (some) weight.9. When I was high school (student).>> When I was in high school.10. I (rode) rollerskating last weekend.>> I went rollerskating last weekend (sports and activities ending with ing use the verb \'go\', as in \'go hiking\' and \'go skiing\'. \'Play\' is used with ball sports, team sports and sports with points).Thank you so much! >> Correct.

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