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Q. Some people believe that to give opportunities to the new generation companies should encourage high-level employees who are older than 55 to retire. Do you agree or disagree?
A.I agree.Because if many older people are in company then the young can’t enter the company.
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A.I agree.Because if many older people are in company then the young can’t enter the company.
>>> I agree because if there is a lot of old people in the company then young employees can’t enter the company.
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