Homework
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Q. More and more people are finding it increasingly important to wear fashionable clothes. Is this attitude to wearing clothes a positive development or negative?
A.I think it is negative.Because if people consume much clothes then earth is getting dirty.
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
>>> A.I think it is negative.
>>> I think wearing fashionable clothes have negative effects.
Because if people consume much clothes then earth is getting dirty.
>>> Because if people purchase so many clothes, the earth will get dirty.
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