homework
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HOMEWORK:
What is your dream car? Answer in a few sentences.
Actually, I\'m not a lot of interested in cars. But sometimes it\'s catch my eyes rich people drive fancy cars. If I have the ability to buy a luxury car, I buy an electric car. Because electric cars can help the environment.
Thank you Donna! Have a peaceful weekend.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름] Ju!
Perhaps cras are really made for the boys. But if we need one, we cn definitely have one that is elegant and a powerful. Electric cars are the trend nowadays and it\'s both our dream to have one.
The corrections and suggestions I made are only a few. Take time to read them, you can easily follow.
I am grateful for your ideas and time in answering my question. Have a healthy and a very happy weekend!
-T. Donna~
>> Actually, I have not a lot of interest in cars.
But sometimes it\'s catch my eyes rich people drive fancy cars.
>> But sometimes, it catches my eyes when rich people drive fancy cars.
If I have the ability to buy a luxury car, I buy an electric car.
>> If I have the ability to buy a luxury car, I will buy an electric car.
Because electric cars can help the environment.
>> Correct!
Or: This is because electric cars can help the environement.
Thank you Donna! Have a peaceful weekend.
Thank you Donna! Have a peaceful weekend.
>> Correct!
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