Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Are you a heavy or light s[이름]per? Please explain your answer.
I am light s[이름]per. Nowadays I can\'t s[이름]p well. Because I have many concern. So, I don\'t drink coffee and effort to think positive
강사 첨삭
Hello, Emily! I hope you will be stress-free. It may not be easy but I know you can do it! I have a tip for you today. In a formal writing, use \'therefore\', \'thus\' or \'as a result\' at the beginning of the sentence instead of \'so\'.-Faith-
Are you a heavy or light s[이름]per? Please explain your answer.>> CORRECT
I am light s[이름]per.
>> I am a light s[이름]per.
Nowadays I can\'t s[이름]p well. Because I have many concern.
>> Nowadays, I cannot s[이름]p well because I have many concerns.
So, I don\'t drink coffee and effort to think positive
>> So, I do not drink coffee and make an effort to think positive.
OR Therefore, I do not drink coffee and make an effort to think positive.
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