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I think K-pop and K-drama have a lot of influence on travelers coming to Korea. K-drama try to make Korean history interesting. And Korean idols are have huge impact on the world. You know, it’s called BTS.
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Hi, [이름] Ho!
I totally agree that K-pop Idols and Korean dramas really have a great effect when it comes to tourism in Korea. You are getting better when it comes to writing in English.
-T. Caitlyn
I think K-pop and K-drama have a lot of influence on travelers coming to Korea.
>> CORRECT
K-drama try to make Korean history interesting.
>> K-drama tries to make Korean history more interesting.
And Korean idols are have huge impact on the world.
>> Also, Korean idols have a huge impact on the world.
You know, it’s called BTS.
>> A good example is the K-pop group called BTS.
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