Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Do you think golf is a rich person’s game or is it open to everyone?
Golf is a rich person\'s game, but these days, the barrier to entry has been lowed.
2. What would make golf more exciting to play or watch?
I am excited to play golf than watching golf.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Chris! Thank you for sending me your homework. I know how interested you are in playing golf. ^^
1. Do you think golf is a rich person’s game or is it open to everyone?
Golf is a rich person\'s game,
>>CORRECT
but these days, the barrier to entry has been lowed.
>>CORRECT
2. What would make golf more exciting to play or watch?
I am excited to play golf than watching golf.
>>I am more excited to play golf than to watch golf.
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