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I think water is precious. Because, in my school they do education of our environment. Also, if we don’t have any water we will be not able to survive. Because we lose our food. We can’t do far[이름]g so we can’t eat all foods. Next I don’t drink enough water everyday. I think drinking water is very tiresome thing to me. Also, I don’t like drinking water so I only drink water when I’m thirsty. I drink some milk and juice more than water.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bella!
I\'m glad to hear your thoughts about this topic.
It really shows your range.
I know you can do better every day.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think water is precious.
>> Correct
Because, in my school they do education of our environment.
>> It\'s because in my school, they educate us about the environment.
Also, if we don’t have any water we will be not able to survive.
>> Also, if we don’t have any water, we will not be able to survive.
Because we lose our food.
>> It\'s because there would be nothing to eat.
We can’t do far[이름]g so we can’t eat all foods.
>> We can’t do far[이름]g so we can’t eat any kind of food.
Next I don’t drink enough water everyday.
>> Next, I don’t drink enough water everyday.
I think drinking water is very tiresome thing to me.
>> I think drinking water is very tiresome for me.
Also, I don’t like drinking water so I only drink water when I’m thirsty.
>> Correct
I drink some milk and juice more than water.
>> I drink more milk and juice than water.
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