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My hometown is called Bucheon. It is located in westside of Seoul. The airport is located very close to my hometown so there is a big shopping mall for tourists. The name of place is Lottemall. my wife and I love that place. Sometimes I go there with my wife. Eat delicious food, go shopping, and look around.
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Hi, [이름] Ho!
It\'s nice to know that your house is near the airport. I think it is really convenient for you to travel to other countries.
-T. Caitlyn
My hometown is called Bucheon. >> CORRECT
It is located in westside of Seoul.
>> It is located on the west side of Seoul.
The airport is located very close to my hometown so there is a big shopping mall for tourists.
>> CORRECT
The name of place is Lottemall.
>> The name of the place is Lotte mall.
my wife and I love that place.
>> My wife and I love that place.
Sometimes I go there with my wife. Eat delicious food, go shopping, and look around.
>> Sometimes I go there with my wife to eat delicious food, go shopping, and look around.
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