Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I have felt giving up English sometimes. First, grammar is so confuse to me. After I learn new grammar and do homework, it is so difficult. It’s because there are many things what I consider about it. Second, there are many difficult vocabularies. I memorize words before I go to the academy. There are so strange words. Some vocabularies are so similar, and some vocabularies are so long. Therefore, I have felt giving up English sometimes.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bella!
I would have to confirm some ideas that you have here.
We have to come up with the best way to express these thoughts.
There\'s always room for improvement.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I have felt giving up English sometimes.
>> I have felt like giving up English sometimes.
First, grammar is so confuse to me.
>> First, grammar is so confusing for me.
After I learn new grammar and do homework, it is so difficult.
>> After I learn a new grammar rule and do my homework, I find it so difficult.
It’s because there are many things what I consider about it.
>> It’s because there are many things that I have to consider.
Second, there are many difficult vocabularies.
>> Correct
I memorize words before I go to the academy.
>> Correct
There are so strange words.
>> Correct
Some vocabularies are so similar, and some vocabularies are so long.
>> Correct
Therefore, I have felt giving up English sometimes.
>> Therefore, I have felt like giving up English sometimes.
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