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2012-03-08 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) I can't imagine Peter going by bike. 2) He agreed to buy a new car. 3) The question is easy to answer. 4) The man asked me how to get to the airport. 5) I look forward to seeing you at the weekend. I don't like a dog. I'm scared it than don't like it. Long time ago when I was a child, I had ever seen my brother being bited by dog. A kid who lived in my neighborhood unleashed a dog. Because my brother didn't lend his bike to him. I and my brother ran away but my brother was bited by dog in front of our house gate the moment he entered. I could not go home and wandered around the street. I have not like a dog since then. My neighbor have a dog now. She don't unleash her dog, but it barks day and night. Our landlord warned her not keeping a pet dog in the studio apartment.

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Hello Miss. [Name], thank you so much for making your homework.. Job well done my dear but I\'m so sorry to hear about what happened to your brother before.. Now I understand why you don\'t like dogs,kkk...^^ Anyway, I\'ll talk to you again later Miss. [Name].. Teacher Cam^^ 1) I can\'t imagine Peter going by bike. >>CORRECT2) He agreed to buy a new car. >>CORRECT3) The question is easy to answer. >>CORRECT4) The man asked me how to get to the airport. >>CORRECT5) I look forward to seeing you at the weekend.>>CORRECTI don\'t like a dog. >>CORRECTI\'m scared it than don\'t like it. >>I\'m scared of it more than not liking it.Long time ago when I was a child, I had ever seen my brother being bited by dog.>>Long time ago, when I was a child, I\'ve seen my brother bitten by a dog. A kid who lived in my neighborhood unleashed a dog. >>A kid who lives in our neigborhood unleashed the dog.Because my brother didn\'t lend his bike to him. >>CORRECTI and my brother ran away but my brother was bited by dog in front of our house gate the moment he entered. >>I and my brother ran away but he was bitten by the dog infront of our gate house the moment he entered.I could not go home and wandered around the street.>>CORRECTI have not like a dog since then. >>I haven\'t liked a dog since then.My neighbor have a dog now. >>My neighbor has a dog now.She don\'t unleash her dog, but it barks day and night. >>She desn\'t unleash the dog but it barks day and night.Our landlord warned her not keeping a pet dog in the studio apartment. >>Our landlord warned her not to keep a dog in the studio apartment.

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