Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, there.
Many Koreans, especially students and salary men, usually say \"burning Friday!\"
It means \"Enjoy your Friday night!\"
Most of Koreans are off on Saturday and Sunday.
However, as you know that, I am duty on Saturday.
Nontheless, It\'s alright, because my clinic close early on Saturday.
Next topic is about Holidays.
You probably know How much I love my day-off.
There are many holidays in Korea.
Among them, Seollal and chuseok are most important.
Each of them has three day-off.
20 years ago, we had a tradition that we met all families including cousins, nephews and relatives.
However, these days, we tend to meet only immediate family.
I think, the most important thing is loving each other in family.
And, in every holidays, we can spend our time with our family, and show my people how much I love them.
That is my homework.
This weekend, I have a special plan to meet my friends in Guang-Ju.
I am really looking forward that moment.
Have a good weekend, Donna!
See you next monday!
강사 첨삭
Weekend greetings, Dr. [이름]!
It is indeed a fiery weekend! I\'m so beat but happy until tomorrow, Sunday for my other work. I hope that meeting your friends can give you some new perspectives and fresh insights as you usher in a new week.
Holidays are special occasions of celebrations and commemorations. Truly, spending it with the people we love makes these days more meaningful and fun-filled. For some like women or mothers in- charged of preparations, holidays are dreadful. Regardless of the stress, these days have to be with the family.
I appreciate all your effort in writing a full length essay always. This time, I have not underlined the suggestion, thus, go over the details in grammar. For now, relax, unwind, and sooth yourself with your family and friends this evening and tomorrow.
Take care and have a blast! See you!
-T. Donna~
>> Hi there.
Many Koreans, especially students and salary men, usually say \"burning Friday!\"
>> Correct!
Or: Many Koreans, especially students and salary men usually say, \" A (burning/ fiery) Friday!\"
It means \"Enjoy your Friday night!\"
>> Correct!
Most of Koreans are off on Saturday and Sunday.
>> Correct!
Or: Most of Koreans are off from work on Saturday and Sunday.However, as you know that, I am duty on Saturday.
>> However, as you know it, I am on duty on Saturdays.
Nontheless, It\'s alright, because my clinic close early on Saturday.
>> Nonetheless, it\'s alright, because my clinic closes early on Saturdays.
Next topic is about Holidays.
>> The next topic is about holidays.
You probably know How much I love my day-off.
>> Correct!
Or: ...how much...
There are many holidays in Korea.
>> Correct!
Among them, Seollal and chuseok are most important.
>> Among them, Seollal and Chuseok are the most important.
Each of them has three day-off.
Each of them has three day-off.
>> Each of them has a three- day off.
>> Each of them has three days off.
20 years ago, we had a tradition that we met all families including cousins, nephews and relatives.
>> Correct!
>> Twenty years ago, we had a tradition where we met all families including cousins, nephews, and relatives.
However, these days, we tend to meet only immediate family.
>> However, these days, we tend to meet only our immediate family.
I think, the most important thing is loving each other in family.
>>I think, the most important thing is loving each other in the family.
And, in every holidays, we can spend our time with our family, and show my people how much I love them.
>> And, in every holiday, we can spend our time with our family and show my people how much I love them.
That is my homework.
>> Correct!
This weekend, I have a special plan to meet my friends in Guang-Ju.
>> Correct!
I am really looking forward that moment.
I am really looking forward that moment.
>> I am really looking forward to that moment.
Have a good weekend, Donna!
>> Correct!
See you next monday!
>> Correct!
Or: Monday
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