Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I wish I’m with my friends at the cafe. I like spend time with my friends. It’s because, I’m happy when I together with my friends and they understand me. Therefore, I like talking with my friends. I like talking with my family, too. But my opinions and parent’s opinions are different, so when I talk with my parent for long time, I’m little bit feel bad.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bella!
You worked hard this week.
The quality of your work is improving over time.
I hope you can continue to build your confidence.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I wish I’m with my friends at the cafe.
>> I wish I’m with my friends at a cafe.
I like spend time with my friends.
>> I like spending time with my friends.
It’s because, I’m happy when I together with my friends and they understand me.
>> It’s because I’m happy when I\'m with my friends and they understand me.
Therefore, I like talking with my friends.
>> Correct
I like talking with my family, too.
>> Correct
But my opinions and parent’s opinions are different, so when I talk with my parent for long time, I’m little bit feel bad.
>> However, my opinions and my parents\' opinions are different, so when I talk with my parents for a long time, I feel a little bit bad.
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