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The biggest problem in my hometown is structure of height limit. Probably you know, my hometown is close to an airport so all buildings in my hometown don\'t exceed 10 floors. Most Bucheon people want to solve this problem because value of their real estate will rise higher than past when structure of height limit is eased.
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Hi, [이름] Ho!
I agree that this is really a problem especially if you are the building owner because you cannot maximize the use of your property.
-T. Caitlyn
The biggest problem in my hometown is structure of height limit. >> The biggest problem in my hometown is the height limit of the structures. / structure\'s height limit
Probably you know, my hometown is close to an airport so all buildings in my hometown don\'t exceed 10 floors.
>> You probably know that my hometown is close to an airport so all buildings there cannot exceed 10 floors.
Most Bucheon people want to solve this problem because value of their real estate will rise higher than past when structure of height limit is eased.
>> Most people in Bucheon want to solve this problem because the value of their real estate will increase when the height limit of structures is eased.
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