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What makes you busy these days?
I want to move my job. So I often apply to the company. To apply the company, I write the resume and practice the interview.
But moving the company is difficult. So I try.
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Hi, Emily! I know you can do it! No matter how hard it is, as long as you have patience and determination, then you can achieve it!-Faith-
What makes you busy these days?>> CORRECT
I want to move my job. So I often apply to the company.
I want to move my job. So I often apply to the company.
>> I want to move for a new job, so I often apply to different companies.
To apply the company, I write the resume and practice the interview.
>> By doing so, I write my resume and practice for an interview.
But moving the company is difficult. So I try.
But moving the company is difficult. So I try.
>> However, moving to a new company is difficult, but I still I want to try it.
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