homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
How can married couples stay married for a very long time? Share your ideas in a short paragraph.
There are many ways to stay married for a long time. One of them is not to do what he or she hates. as well as to do like. It is very important to have a relationship. They pay close attention and respect each other. So even if their partners don\'t agree, they don\'t fight.
I will re-register the class on August 10th. Because it\'s my salary day. I want to continue to have classes with Donna!
Have a good evening!
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름] Ju!
Truly, understanding and respect towards each other define how long two people stay together forever. It needs constant work as how one grows a plan in the garden to make the plants bloom- it needs enough water, sunlight, weeding, fertilizers, among others. If there is imbalance and we do not get what we want, the relationship becomes cumebrsome and like a plant, love withers. So, we have to nourish our relationship with that special someone everytime for better or for worse.
In the future, have a blissful marriage. Thank you for your homework answer. Please take note of the second sentence and he suggestions I made there. Well done!
Good night!
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
I will re-register the class on August 10th. Because it\'s my salary day. I want to continue to have classes with Donna!
One of them is not to do what he or she hates. as well as to do like.
>> One of them is not to do what he or she hates as well as to do what each other likes.
It is very important to have a relationship.
>> Correct!
They pay close attention and respect each other.
>> Correct!
So even if their partners don\'t agree, they don\'t fight.
>> Correct!
I will re-register the class on August 10th. Because it\'s my salary day. I want to continue to have classes with Donna!
>> Correct!
Or: I will re-register the class on August 10th because it\'s my salary day. I want to continue to have classes with you, Donna!
Have a good evening!
Have a good evening!
>> Correct!
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