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2022-08-03 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

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How do you make it up to your family? I contact constantly and meet my family. And sometimes we go on a trip to the place I introduce. Spending time together is the best way to make it up.

강사 첨삭

I always believe that time is precious and priceless, Emily. Your parents are fortunate to have you as their daughter!-Faith-
How do you make it up to your family?
>> CORRECT
I contact constantly and meet my family. 
>> CORRECT
OR I contact and meet my family constantly
And sometimes we go on a trip to the place I introduce.
>> Sometimes, we go on a trip to the place I introduce.
Spending time together is the best way to make it up.
>> Spending time together is the best way to make it up to them.

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