homework
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HOMEWORK:
[Writing Exercise] In your opinion, what is the most popular summer destination in Korea? Answer in 3-5 sentences.
Every summer, A lot of people go to beach.
Korea has three coasts.
My favorite place is East Coast. That\\\'s separated a lot of beach and it\'s clean.
HOMEWORK:
[Writing Task] How do you see/imagine yourself 10 years from now? Kindly answer in not more than 5 sentences.
If I can I would like make a coffee in my shop
And Sometimes I go to travel with my family.
Sure, I can speak to english in abroad for my family.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름]! ^_^)
Thank you for finding time to accomplish your homework.
I have made some modifications for you to review later on.
If you have questions, we can talk about them in class.
Have a good night!
__Teacher Mayleen :)
Every summer, A lot of people go to beach.
>>> Every summer, a lot of people go to the beach.
Korea has three coasts.
Korea has three coasts.
>>> CORRECT
My favorite place is East Coast. That\\\'s separated a lot of beach and it\'s clean.
My favorite place is East Coast. That\\\'s separated a lot of beach and it\'s clean.
>>> My favorite place is the East Coast. That\'s separated a lot of beaches, and they\'re clean.
>>> OR: The East Coast is one of my favorite places. Numerous clean beaches are located there.
If I can I would like make a coffee in my shop
>>> If possible, I\'d like to make a coffee in my shop.
And Sometimes I go to travel with my family.
And Sometimes I go to travel with my family.
>>> Sometimes I travel with my family.
Sure, I can speak to english in abroad for my family.
Sure, I can speak to english in abroad for my family.
>>> Sure, I can speak English when I\'m with my family overseas.
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