homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
Why do we need to have our own hobbies or interests? Answer in a few sentences.
The world is full of fun things. Diverse experiences from hobbies and interests enrich our lives. As you said, It also makes us happy. I think people get energy from others, so we have fun interacting with various people or focusing on something.
Maybe there is an error in my feedback number 6. Could you lookover that?
6. That\'s not solve the problem, that\'s become a problem.
>> Correct!
Or: That\'s not solve the problem, that\'s become a problem.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] Ju!
Interesting hobbies energize us. We cannot just do work all the time, hobbies are our creative and fun side. In your case, sharing ideas and digging in deep and useful thoughts is an enjoyable activity.
Anyway, congratulations for all the correct sentences here on your homework answer! Item number 6 has been rectified on your personal page as well as noted down below. Please go over it wel.
Thank you for your great effort as always.
Good night!
-T. Donna~
The world is full of fun things.
>> Correct!
Diverse experiences from hobbies and interests enrich our lives.
>> Correct!
As you said, It also makes us happy.
>> Correct!
Or: As you said, it also makes us happy.
I think people get energy from others, so we have fun interacting with various people or focusing on something.
>> Correct!
Maybe there is an error in my feedback number 6. Could you lookover that?
>> Correct!
Or: Could you look over it?
6. That\'s not solve the problem, that\'s become a problem.
>> Correct!
Or: That\'s not solve the problem, that\'s become a problem.
>> 6. That\'s not solve the problem, that\'s become a problem.
>> Correct!
Or: If that does not solve the problem, that becomes a bigger problem.
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