homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Where would you like to take your parents and sister someday?
I want to travel to many places with my family.
I want to travel to many countries abroad and many places in Korea.
I hope I can do that.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jesica! This is nice to know. I also hope that you and your family go to a lot of beautiful places. Thanks for doing your homework. Keep safe!:)
~T. Annie
I want to travel to many places with my family. I want to travel to many countries abroad and many places in Korea.
>>CORRECT!
I want to travel to many countries abroad and many places in Korea.
OR>>I want to visit several foreign countries and many places in Korea in Korea.
I hope I can do that.
>>CORRECT!
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