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I think I just have a little interest at latest things and news. Because, I think new things are not big matter to me. Therefore, I don’t find or search about new things or news. I just know new things from my friends or family. However, when all of my friends have some new thing, then I want get that, too. I think the reason why I don’t have big interest in new things is trend is change very fastly.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bella!
That is how you start the week!
Great job, Bella!
You impress me all the time.
Continue doing a good job.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think I just have a little interest at latest things and news.
>> I think I just have a little interest in the latest things and news.
Because, I think new things are not big matter to me.
>> I think it\'s because new things are not a big deal.
Therefore, I don’t find or search about new things or news.
>> Therefore, I don’t search about new things or news.
I just know new things from my friends or family.
>> I just hear about these new things from my friends or family.
However, when all of my friends have some new thing, then I want get that, too.
>> However, when all of my friends have some new things, then, I want to get those, too.
I think the reason why I don’t have big interest in new things is trend is change very fastly.
>> I think the reason why I don’t have a big interest in new things is because trends can change very quickly.
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