Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Teacher! I’m [이름][이름]. I can’t see your feedback. I think it’s because a month is gone. Therefore, I only see today’s date. I’m so sorry.. It’s too short, so I speak about today’s TMI. Today I eat kiwi first time this year. Kiwi isn’t my favorite fruit so I don’t have any expectation but now I love kiwi so much.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bella!
I loved reading about your day.
You can tell me more in the future.
I look forward to your next composition as well.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Hello Teacher!
>> Correct
I’m [이름][이름].
>> It\'s me, [이름][이름].
I can’t see your feedback.
>> Correct
I think it’s because a month is gone.
>> I think it’s because a month has passed.
Therefore, I only see today’s date.
>> Correct
I’m so sorry.
>> Correct
It’s too short, so I speak about today’s TMI.
>> It’s too short, so I will talk about today’s events.
Today I eat kiwi first time this year.
>> Today, I ate kiwi for the first time this year.
Kiwi isn’t my favorite fruit so I don’t have any expectation but now I love kiwi so much.
>> Kiwi isn’t my favorite fruit so I didn\'t have any expectations but now I love kiwis so much.
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