Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. Scientists believe that in order to protect the environment, people must use less energy in their daily lives. However, most people have not changed the way they live. Why do you think many people have not taken individual action? What could be done to encourage them to take action?
A.People don’t use less energy.Because if people use less energy then they can feel uncomfortable.We can advertise about envioroment to encourage them to take action.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]! You\'re really diligent in doing your essays! Keep writing and keep learning! See you! ^^
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
A.People don’t use less energy.Because if people use less energy then they can feel uncomfortable.
>>> People don’t use less energy because if they do, they can feel uncomfortable.
We can advertise about environment to encourage them to take action.
>>> We can promote environmental advocacies to encourage them to take actions.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.