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2012-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) We decided to buy a new car. 2) They've got some work to do. 3) Peter gave up smoking . 4) He'd like flying an aeroplane. 5) I enjoy writing picture postcards. I have a plan this Sunday. I will meet my colleague who worked with me at the library of Daegu Haany University 7 years ago. She works at the library of elementary school in Seoul now. We were friendly when we worked together. We had much in common. She was a Catholic, studied bible like me and had a nice personality. kk We will have a lunch together and attend a mass. We have not conected each other since she left the library to enter a graduated school 7 years ago. She knew that I live in Cheon-An that is close Seoul that she lives in. She got to know my new phone number through other coworker. Recently, she conected me by text massage. We were glad and promised to meet.

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Hello Miss. [Name], thank you so much for sending your composition and job well done!!! I\'m really hoping that you\'re gonna enjoy your weekend with your friend.. Talk to you again later Miss. [Name].. Teacher Cam^^ 1) We decided to buy a new car. >>correct2) They\'ve got some work to do. >>correct3) Peter gave up smoking . >>correct4) He\'d like flying an aeroplane. >>correct5) I enjoy writing picture postcards.>>correctI have a plan this Sunday. >>correctI will meet my colleague who worked with me at the library of Daegu Haany University 7 years ago. >>correctShe works at the library of elementary school in Seoul now. >>correctWe were friendly when we worked together. >>correctWe had much in common. >>correctShe was a Catholic, studied bible like me and had a nice personality. kk >>correctWe will have a lunch together and attend a mass. >>correctWe have not conected each other since she left the library to enter a graduated school 7 years ago. >>correctShe knew that I live in Cheon-An that is close Seoul that she lives in. >>correctShe got to know my new phone number through other coworker. >>correctRecently, she conected me by text massage. >>Recently, I keep in touch with her by sending messages.We were glad and promised to meet. >>We are glad to see each other and promised to meet again.  

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