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My dream isn’t a translator. Also, grammar and vocabularies are difficult to me. Therefore, I wouldn’t like to work as a translator. I think there are some problems to work translator. First is translators can understand that countries’ culture. It’s because, if they couldn’t understand culture, we can’t see perfect sentences. Second is always they learn about slang. Slangs are make very fast. Also it’s hard to other country’s people understand. Therefore, translators learn about new slangs.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bella!
I think your expressions suit you well.
You can expand your ideas by giving more examples.
That would explain your opinions well.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
My dream isn’t a translator.
>> My dream isn’t to become a translator.
Also, grammar and vocabularies are difficult to me.
>> Also, grammar and vocabulary are difficult for me.
Therefore, I wouldn’t like to work as a translator.
>> Correct
I think there are some problems to work translator.
>> I think there are some problems in working as a translator.
First is translators can understand that countries’ culture.
>> First, translators must understand the country\'s culture.
It’s because, if they couldn’t understand culture, we can’t see perfect sentences.
>> It’s because if they don\'t understand the culture, they wouldn\'t be able to translate perfectly.
Second is always they learn about slang.
>> Second, they need to learn about slang.
Slangs are make very fast.
>> People speak in slang very fast.
Also it’s hard to other country’s people understand.
>> Also it’s hard for another country’s people to understand.
Therefore, translators learn about new slangs.
>> Therefore, translators must learn about new slang.
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