Homework
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The most time-consu[이름]g thing in my life is sleeping. It’s because we always sleep until we die. Also, I think sleeping is important to people. If we can’t sleep well last night, and we are so tired and sleepy all in that day. When I have a sleep shorter than usual day, it’s difficult to focus on tomorrow. I think take a sleep seven or eight hours is the best way to pretend tomorrow.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bella!
We\'re at the end of the road for this week again.
It has been a glorious journey.
I hope you are happy with what you have accomplished.
We\'ll keep practicing next week,^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
The most time-consu[이름]g thing in my life is sleeping.
>> Correct
It’s because we always sleep until we die.
>> Correct
Also, I think sleeping is important to people.
>> Correct
If we can’t sleep well last night, and we are so tired and sleepy all in that day.
>> If we can’t sleep well at night, we would be so tired and sleepy the whole of the next day.
When I have a sleep shorter than usual day, it’s difficult to focus on tomorrow.
>> When I don\'t get enough sleep, it would be difficult to focus the next day.
I think take a sleep seven or eight hours is the best way to pretend tomorrow.
>> I think getting seven or eight hours of sleep is the best way to function the next day.
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