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2022-08-15 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

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What kind of Korean food could you eat every day for two months? Could you tell me about that food? I ate common Korean food. Usually we eat rice with side dishes. At summer, many Korean eat Kongguksu(bean noodle) and Naengmyeon(cold noodle). I like it too. Kongguksu is made by grind bean with water and add flour noodle. And season salt or sugar. Naengmyeon is made by meat broth.

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Wow! Good morning, Emily! I am hungry now after reading your favorite food. I hope I can try them soon. See you!
-Faith-
What kind of Korean food could you eat every day for two months? Could you tell me about that food?
>> CORRECT
I ate common Korean food. 
>> I eat typical Korean food. 
Usually we eat rice with side dishes.
>> Usually, we eat rice with side dishes.
At summer, many Korean eat Kongguksu(bean noodle) and Naengmyeon(cold noodle). I like it too. 
>> In summer, many Koreans eat Kongguksu(bean noodle) and Naengmyeon(cold noodle), I like them, too.
Kongguksu is made by grind bean with water and add flour noodle. And season salt or sugar. 
>> Kongguksu is made with grind bean with water, flour noodle, and seasoned salt or sugar.
Naengmyeon is made by meat broth.
>> Naengmyeon is made with meat broth.

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