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What do you always have to check these days?
These days Korea weather is very hot. Therefore check the air conditioner off before go to outside. We must not waste electricity.
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I totally agree with you, Emily! Stay cool. Take care!-Faith-
What do you always have to check these days?>> CORRECT
These days Korea weather is very hot.
>> These days, Korea weather is very hot.
Therefore check the air conditioner off before go to outside.
>> Therefore, I check the air conditioner if it is off before going outside.
We must not waste electricity.
>> CORRECT
OR We must save energy.
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