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Among many Korean foods, I recommend
“japchae” and “bulgogi”.
Bulgogi is a kind of seasoned meat dish.
Japchae is one of the noodle dishes.
Both are representative traditional Korean
dishes that are delicious.
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Good day, Miss [이름] Mi!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. CamilleAmong many Korean foods, I recommend “japchae” and “bulgogi”.
>> CORRECT!
Bulgogi is a kind of seasoned meat dish.
>> CORRECT!
Japchae is one of the noodle dishes.
Japchae is one of the noodle dishes.
>> CORRECT!
Both are representative traditional Korean
dishes that are delicious.
Both are representative traditional Korean
dishes that are delicious.
>> Both represent our traditional Korean dishes that are delicious.
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