homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
As a friend, what is your best quality? Share your answer in a few sentences.
The reason why we need to make good friends is because they are strong supporter and give honest feedbacks for me. In a life, we face many problems and difficulties. So, we have to listen to other people\'s advices and get help from them.
I think you were confused with another student because you have many students. I often do that, too.
I\'m just saying never mind. :)
Have a good evening Donna!
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름] Ju!
You are right, I made a mistake on the topic we discussed in class today. I already rectified it, thank you so much for calling attention to it again. I am grateful for your keen skills to spot the \'not\'. However, it would be better if I would not commit any mistake. Let me do my best all the time.
Here on your homework answer, friends as our cheerers and shoulders we can lean on are absolutely correct. Hence, let us be one.
Your sentences were combinations of long and short sentences with very good word arrangements. Study the underlined words correctly because they are the suggestions. Thank you for doing your best all the time. Catch you soon!
-T. Donna ~
>> The reason why we need to make good friends is because they are strong supporters and give honest feedbacks to me.
In a life, we face many problems and difficulties.
>> Correct!
So, we have to listen to other people\'s advices and get help from them.
>> So, we have to listen to other people\'s pieces of advice and get help from them.
I think you were confused with another student because you have many students. I often do that, too.
I think you were confused with another student because you have many students. I often do that, too.
>> Correct!
I\'m just saying never mind. :)
I\'m just saying never mind. :)
>> Correct!
Have a good evening Donna!
Have a good evening Donna!
>> Correct!
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