Homework
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Describe the nicest hotel you have stayed at.
When I traveled to Hong kong, At that time I stayed three days in hotel. There had swimming pool, nice restaurant and deluxe room.
I swam everyday and ate a lot breakfast. There\'s price was about 200us dollars per night. If end the covid, I want to visit one more time.
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Apparently, you enjoyed your stay there, Emily. I hope you can revisit this place in the future.-Faith-
Describe the nicest hotel you have stayed at.>> CORRECT
When I traveled to Hong kong, At that time I stayed three days in hotel.
>> When I traveled to Hong Kong, at that time, I stayed three days in a hotel.
There had swimming pool, nice restaurant and deluxe room.
>> It had a swimming pool, nice restaurant, and deluxe room.
I swam everyday and ate a lot breakfast.
I swam everyday and ate a lot breakfast.
>> I swam every day and ate a lot for breakfast.
There\'s price was about 200us dollars per night.
>> The hotel room price was about 200 US dollars per night.
If end the covid, I want to visit one more time.
>> When the COVID-19 pandemic ends, I want to visit there one more time.
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