Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I have been afraid or reluctant ask to someone. First is when I request some difficult thing. It’s because I don’t like refused request, and difficult request is hard to accept. Therefore I’m reluctant when I ask about something hard to do. Second is when I only have some question in academy. During academy teachers ask to students do you have any question? like that. When everyone don’t raise up their hand but I have a question, it’s hard to ask.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bella!
You need to paint more of a picture to express your thoughts.
Use descriptive words.
They would be helpful in your explanations.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Yes, I have been afraid or reluctant ask to someone.
>> Yes, I have been afraid or reluctant in asking people questions.
First is when I request some difficult thing.
>> First is when I request something difficult.
It’s because I don’t like refused request, and difficult request is hard to accept.
>> It’s because I don’t like it when people refuse my request and a difficult request is hard to accept.
Therefore I’m reluctant when I ask about something hard to do.
>> Therefore, I’m reluctant when I ask somebody to do something hard.
Second is when I only have some question in academy.
>> Second is when I have some questions in the academy.
During academy teachers ask to students do you have any question? like that.
>> In the academy, teachers ask students if they have any questions.
When everyone don’t raise up their hand but I have a question, it’s hard to ask.
>> When nobody raises their hand, and I have a question, it’s hard to ask.
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