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I think I should recycle plastics. It’s because I use many plastics most often. Like when I drink juice, when I eat delivery food, and so on. Then, now there are many ways how we recycle plastics. I think recycle is mandatory nowadays. If we wouldn’t recycle, Earth is getting worse then we might be hard to live in Earth.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bella!
Let\'s end the week on a high note.
You really worked hard and I hope you appreciate that.
Let\'s get ready for a new week.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think I should recycle plastics.
>> I think I should recycle plastic.
It’s because I use many plastics most often.
>> It’s because I often use a lot of plastic.
Like when I drink juice, when I eat delivery food, and so on.
>> This happens when I drink juice, when I have food delivered, and so on.
Then, now there are many ways how we recycle plastics.
>> Now, there are many ways to recycle plastic.
I think recycle is mandatory nowadays.
>> I think recycling is mandatory nowadays.
If we wouldn’t recycle, Earth is getting worse then we might be hard to live in Earth.
>> If we don\'t recycle, the earth could get worse and it might become harder to live on this planet.
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