Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Get angry is not good. We can solve problem with out get angry. We can solve problem with talking. Get angry can make people sad.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
Get angry is not good.
>> Getting angry is not good.
We can solve problem with out get angry.
>> We can solve problems without getting angry.
We can solve problem with talking.
>> We can solve problems with talking.
Get angry can make people sad.
>> Getting angry can make people sad.
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