Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite rice dish is [이름]-chi fried rice. It’s because [이름]-chi fried rice is easy to make so, my mother makes this dish often. Also, I like [이름]-chi. My favorite [이름]-chi fried rice’s recipe is make fried rice bottom part crispy and add mozzarella cheese. I love this recipe and I ate that yesterday, too. Therefore, my favorite rice dish is [이름]-chi fried rice. I’m sorry but I don’t know meaning of rice play.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bella!
I know you\'re really busy being in school and all.
However, I appreciate your consistency.
This will definitely benefit you in the long run.
So, keep working hard.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
My favorite rice dish is [이름]-chi fried rice.
>> Correct
It’s because [이름]-chi fried rice is easy to make so, my mother makes this dish often.
>> Correct
Also, I like [이름]-chi.
>> Correct
My favorite [이름]-chi fried rice’s recipe is make fried rice bottom part crispy and add mozzarella cheese.
>> My favorite [이름]-chi fried rice’s recipe is making the bottom part crispy and adding mozzarella cheese.
I love this recipe and I ate that yesterday, too.
>> I love this recipe and I ate it yesterday, too.
Therefore, my favorite rice dish is [이름]-chi fried rice.
>> Correct
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