Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Please tell me more about your French festival experience.
When February 2016, I visited Nice. Nice is located in Southern France. The place is famous for \'Nice Carnival\'. Every year held in February. I wanted to see Nice carnival. Because Nice carnival is The three great festivals of the world. Therefore I enjoyed festival and saw. It was best time.
강사 첨삭
I believe it is one of your most memorable moments, Emily! I also hope you can revisit Nice someday! -Faith-
Please tell me more about your French festival experience.>> CORRECT
When February 2016, I visited Nice.
>> In February 2016, I visited Nice.
Nice is located in Southern France.
>> CORRECT
The place is famous for \'Nice Carnival\'.
>> CORRECT
Every year held in February.
>> It is held every February.
I wanted to see Nice carnival. Because Nice carnival is The three great festivals of the world.
>> I want to see it again because it is one of the three great festivals in the world.
Therefore I enjoyed festival and saw. It was best time.
>> Therefore, I enjoyed the festival when I saw it.
It was best time.
>> It was the best time.
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