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I like travelling for a few year non-stop. It’s because it can be big rest on our life. If we travelling a few year non-stop, sometimes we would forget our before life and we wouldn’t think about before life. Therefore, for their life is tired or bored and want new experience, travelling for a few year non-stop can be very good solution. I haven’t gone travelling for a few year non-stop. My family travelling just one week, or two weeks. I want go travelling a few year non-stop somedays.
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Hi Bella!
Let your imagination take over.
Talk about what you see in the future.
I expect you to create a more vivid picture with your words in the co[이름]g days.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I like travelling for a few year non-stop.
>> I like to go travelling for a few years non-stop.
It’s because it can be big rest on our life.
>> It\'s because it would be a break from life.
If we travelling a few year non-stop, sometimes we would forget our before life and we wouldn’t think about before life.
>> If we travel for a few years non-stop, sometimes, we could forget the past.
Therefore, for their life is tired or bored and want new experience, travelling for a few year non-stop can be very good solution.
>> Therefore, for people who are tired of their lives and want a new experience, travelling for a few years non-stop can be a good option.
I haven’t gone travelling for a few year non-stop.
>> I haven’t gone travelling for a few years non-stop.
My family travelling just one week, or two weeks.
>> My family usually travels for only one to two weeks.
I want go travelling a few year non-stop somedays.
>> I want to go travelling a few years non-stop someday.
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