homework

My anwser is : I object move in the country. because city is very convenient and has a variety facilities. But country don't have. so air of country is nice. But city is not pool. in its final l want that my parents will living in the city. because if my parents will living in the country, they often don't see me.

Wonderful Monday, Lisa!   Thank you for your splendid essay. I like your opinion about your preference to live in the city rather than in a country. I made some corrections in your sentences. Please take a look and study. See you later in our class. ~Teacher Lorraine~   My anwser is : >> Correct! I object move in the country. because city is very convenient and has a variety facilities. But country don\'t have. >> I object to move in the country because living in the city is very convenient and it has a variety of facilities which the country doesn\'t have. (Sentence Construction) so air of country is nice. But city is not pool. >> The country offers fresh air wherein the city has polluted air. (Sentence Construction) in its final l want that my parents will living in the city. because if my parents will living in the country, they often don\'t see me. >>  l want that my parents will live in the city because if my parents will live in the country, they won\'t often see me. (Sentence Construction)