homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Title: My Dream Vacation
I always had a passion about study when the vacation is approaching.
When the vacation starts, I set a goal about study. In the beginning, I studied as planned.
However I\'m gradually losing track of my plans. So my dream vacation is to keep the plan well.
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>> I always had a passion for studying whenever vacation is approaching.
When the vacation starts, I set a goal about study.
When the vacation starts, I set a goal about study.
>> At the start of my vacation, I set my goal to study.
In the beginning, I studied as planned.
>> Correct.
However I\'m gradually losing track of my plans.
However I\'m gradually losing track of my plans.
>> However, I\'m gradually losing track of my plans.
So my dream vacation is to keep the plan well.
>> So my dream vacation is to stay well on track with my plan.
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