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I think they have difference between a souvenir and a present. Souvenir recall some places and Present recall for people. First, I can get souvenirs from special places like when I travelling. Therefore, when I look at souvenirs, then I think about place where I get that one. Next, I can get present from other people. Therefore, when I look at present, that recall people who give that to me.
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I always thank you at the end of the week.
It\'s because I know how hard you work.
I can always see your dedication to improvement.
These things should always be appreciated.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think they have difference between a souvenir and a present.
>> I think there is a difference between a souvenir and a present.
Souvenir recall some places and Present recall for people.
>> Souvenirs could help us recall our memories in the future.
First, I can get souvenirs from special places like when I travelling.
>> First, I can get souvenirs from special places like when I\'m travelling.
Therefore, when I look at souvenirs, then I think about place where I get that one.
>> Therefore, when I look at souvenirs, I think about the places where I got them.
Next, I can get present from other people.
>> Next, I can receive souvenirs as presents from other people.
Therefore, when I look at present, that recall people who give that to me.
>> Therefore, when I look at some of my presents, I recall the people who gave them to me.
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