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What are the advantages of ordering food online?
Hi teacher I decide to do my homework from today. It couldn\' make up for anything for improving English skill.
Sometimes I don\'t want to do anything like I am on the weekend. Even if I ate a meal, we feel so hungry, we order food online. It is very convenient.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for your homework. I really appreciate you taking time from your busy schedule. I hope you can learn and improve your English writing skills by your doing your homework regularly.
-T. Caitlyn
Hi teacher I decide to do my homework from today. >> Hi, Teacher. I decided to do my homework starting today.
It couldn\' make up for anything for improving English skill.
>> I couldn\'t think of anything more to improve my English skills.
Sometimes I don\'t want to do anything like I am on the weekend.
Sometimes I don\'t want to do anything like I am on the weekend.
>> Sometimes I don\'t want to do anything just like on weekends.
Even if I ate a meal, we feel so hungry, we order food online. It is very convenient.
>> Even after eating, we still feel hungry so we order food online because it is very convenient.
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