homework
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HOMEWORK:
If you will create a commercial business, what will it contain? Share your answer in a few sentences.
If I start a commercial business, I want to make an item about learning and self-development. Because learning and development are the most important things in my life. Therefore, my goal is to share a lot of things with people.
Thank you Donna!
Have a Good afternoon.
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Hi there, [이름] Ju! Good evening!
Self development is vital in our lives if want to feel accoplished and satisfied with our growth as an individual. I hope that your commercial will come true soon.
You\'ve done an excellent job for this homework! For the first two sentences, you can combine them by saying: \" If I start a commercial business, I want to make an item about learning and self-development because these are the most important things in my life.\"
See you again on Friday!
-T. Donna~
If I start a commercial business, I want to make an item about learning and self-development.
>> Correct!
Because learning and development are the most important things in my life.
>> Correct!
Or: Learning and development are the most important things in my life.
Therefore, my goal is to share a lot of things with people.
>> Correct!
Thank you Donna!
>> Correct!
Have a Good afternoon.
>> Correct!
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