homework
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Title: The Importance of Being Responsible
Why is Being Responsible Important? Tell something about him/her using 3 to 4 short paragraphs.
Responsibility is very important. In my case, no matter what happened I do my best in my jobs to finish.
I work in my university now, my department have doing many businesses. Among them, we have business with students.
but some students are quit the activity so I upset because I recruit other students.
I think these days of some students don\'t have responsibility. they don\'t have earnestness.
I think responsibility is own face.
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>> Being responsible is very important.
In my case, no matter what happened I do my best in my jobs to finish.
>> In my case, I always do my best to finish my tasks.
I work in my university now, my department have doing many businesses.
>> I work in the university that I am in, our department has been doing a lot of businesses.
Among them, we have business with students.
>> One of these is our business with students.
but some students are quit the activity so I upset because I recruit other students.
>> But some students quit the activities so I get upset because I need to recruit other students.
I think these days of some students don\'t have responsibility.
>> I think this generation of students don\'t have the sense of responsibility.
they don\'t have earnestness.
>> Correct. OR They don\'t possess earnestness in them.
I think responsibility is own face.
>> I think everyone needs to face responsibilities.
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