homework
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What criteria do you think that newspapers and television use to decide on what news to present: what is important or what sells newspapers? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
I think that people are interested in the news related with their life. For example, climate change, a sharp increase in prices and a war of world. So they are going through the report before they decide on what news to present. I like to watch news. It is fun than watching other programs.
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Hi there, [이름]. Thank you for checking out the homework bit and for sharing your thoughts on the subject :) Watching the news is very educational and we should be aware of what\'s going on around us. I\'m glad you find it more run than other programs ^^ I hope you are having a good midweek evening. Have a good night\'s rest. ~Jane <\",)
I think that people are interested in the news related with their life.
>> I think that people are interested in the news related to their life.
For example, climate change, a sharp increase in prices and a war of world.
>> For example, climate change, a sharp increase in prices, and a war in the world.
So they are going through the report before they decide on what news to present.
>> So they are going through the reports before they decide on what news to present.
I like to watch news.
>> I like to watch the news.
It is fun than watching other programs.
>> It is more fun than watching other programs.
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