homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) We decided to buy a cake for my birthday.
2) They've got some important things to do.
3) Sam gave up drinking.
4) He'd like flying a kite.
5) I enjoy sending picture postcards.
I went to Seoul yesterday to meet my friend Nuri.
We directly met at a restaurant to have a lunch.
We met for the first time in 7 years but we didn't feel awkward.
We talked continually forgetting ordering.
When it passed 30 min, we ordered some food.
We talked about each other's work life.
Our talking about work life was concluded our boss of backbiting.
It took to us over 3 hours to eat a meal.
After lunch, we attended a mass at 5pm.
We went to Myung-Dong Catholic church.
It is a big church as a cathedral.
It has 10 times mass in Sunday.
We could select a mass any time.
Before we attend a mass, we confessed together.
Our backbiting was forgived by fonfessing, we attend a mass to be pure heart.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name] thank you so much for your composition..Job well done!:)
I\'m really happy to hear taht you had a great weekend my dear..and maybe we can talk about that more on our class my dear..
Thank you so much Miss. [Name], and keep up the good work..^^
Teacher Cam^^
1) We decided to buy a cake for my birthday.
>>correct2) They\'ve got some important things to do. >>correct3) Sam gave up drinking.
>>correct4) He\'d like flying a kite.
>>correct5) I enjoy sending picture postcards.>>correctI went to Seoul yesterday to meet my friend Nuri.
>>correctWe directly met at a restaurant to have a lunch.
>>correctWe met for the first time in 7 years but we didn\'t feel awkward.
>>correctWe talked continually forgetting ordering.
>>We talked continuously and we even forgot to order.When it passed 30 min, we ordered some food.
>>After 30 minutes, we finally ordered our food.We talked about each other\'s work life.
>>We talked about each other\'s life specially at work.Our talking about work life was concluded our boss of backbiting.
>>Our conversation regarding our job included backbiting our boss.^^It took to us over 3 hours to eat a meal.
>>correctAfter lunch, we attended a mass at 5pm.>>correctWe went to Myung-Dong Catholic church.
>>correctIt is a big church as a cathedral.
>>It\'s a big church, as big as a cathedral.It has 10 times mass in Sunday.
>>Every Sunday, they conduct a mass ten times.We could select a mass any time.
>>correctBefore we attend a mass, we confessed together.
>>correctOur backbiting was forgived by fonfessing, we attend a mass to be pure heart.
>>Our sin (back biting) was forgiven, so we attended the mass to have a pure heart.
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